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Critique by Suppi-lu-liuma Suppi-lu-liuma/critique/608958007">Apr 5, 2012, 12:58:31 AM
Nice pose indeed. The background is vivid and the position of the goose on the diagonal is interesting.

IMHO, there are a few points that could be emphasized:

I tend to prefer to place the model a little more on the left to avoid centrality and to leave more room in the direction of its flight.

The vividity of the background color seems to undermine the role of the main model, could desaturation be an option?

Finally, the sharpness on the eye is weak, and it seems to be improved thru increase of sharpness at PS but this has led to halos.

Thank you for sharing,

With friendship,

Suppi
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SilverVulpine Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Marvelously clear capture! :D
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andy-j-s Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks A Lot. :)
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SilverVulpine Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome. :)
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Debs-Rain Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
Me being a mere mortal I'm happy enough just getting a duck. Never mind one in flight andddd with it's gob open.... He must have been chasing a lady there.. crazy chase time of year again Lol. Great in flight fella, the green really makes the drake stand out well too. A cracking quacker shot :)
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andy-j-s Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks A Lot Debs. :)
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WillTC Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
look like it's smiling :D
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:iconandy-j-s:
andy-j-s Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
HaHa Maybe. :)
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davincipoppalag Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It has an almost 3D effect.. cool
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:iconandy-j-s:
andy-j-s Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks Dave
I Like To Get Good Subject Separation But Always
Hope It Doesn't End Up Looking Like A Cut And Paste Job. :)
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davincipoppalag Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think its beautiful
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